He left her three days back , but couldn't bear distance so he, today was back. He knocked the door but nobody answered so he used her keys to unlock the door. A mess was waiting for him as he entered he saw cloths, frames, pens and everything on floor. Picking up everything that came between his way he finally reached their master room. He knocked but again no answer so he checked the lock and opened the door. The room was empty but back door was opened and there he saw his girl sitting. He went in the room and touched her from back and then his eyes saw the worst thing of his life, his girl's body touched the floor. He hold her hand but her body was cold, as cold as ice. His face turned pale, tears rolled down and he said;
' So Honey your wait has comes to an end '
-illusiOn~
P.S( an awful attempt)
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first things first....its not an aweful attempt! I wld say its normal bordering on average....but dont blame coz u hav gt me into dis habit of readin masterpieces frm u.....sry if i sound a bit rude but u shld take dat as a compliment!
likd da subject though nd da way u dealt wid it...crisp!
nice work! stil nt jst da Insiya I knw! Am sure u understand! :)
its a decent read... dont say its aweful :)
take care... cheers...
Great! I liked it... I thought it was short and to the point, which I like :)
it was nice...i liked it...
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