Tuesday, April 14, 2009

Un-titled ~

Tuesday, April 14, 2009
Un-Titled


It was 9:15 a.m when door almost banged.. Knock on the door was hell loud and still the girl in the bed was deep in sleep. Hats off to her obstinacy. she is ANIA ALI and this is her room. In this house she lives with two brother, 1 sister, a grand mother and parents. WOO The door is still banging..

' ANIA ! open the door ' She is off-course her mother.
' ANIA ! open the door you idiot. Just look at the time its 9:15. Aren't you getting late for college..' She screamed. The loud scream was this time successful as Ania opened the door.

Yawning, she give a look to her mother's angry pretty face and in slow voice she mumbled;

' Ma ! its Saturday and since when I go to college on Saturday. It's weekend ' Although she was right still she hoped for a scold..
' Fine if its weekend but dare you go to sleep, get up and dress yourself and then come down and help me in kitchen, No servants are provided to me by your father PRINCESS! Now come down quickly' She ordered and left Ania who was still standing with hand on door.


Ania turned around and saw AKIF sitting on bed watching her.

' Hey beautiful ! GOOD-MORNING! ' He said in his chilled voice.
' What Good morning? what so good in it. You listened to her don't you? Every time i am scolded for no bloody reason even if its not my mistake.' She complained while moaning.

Ania closed the door and set near AKIF, who was quite instead of comforting her, he was quite.

' Ania ! it's okay. She is mom na.. Always loaded with things. Don't take her words on heart dearie. She loves you ! Now dress yourself and go down, have your breakfast and we will meet after that.. OKAY OKAY don't you worry I wont go anywhere will wait for you here only. Now go! ' He ordered and acted on what he told her, she left the room dressed in pink salwar suit.
Downstairs it was all mess as it was Saturday and her two brothers were at home sitting in lounge playing some video game. She quickly walked in kitchen, luckily her father was there reading newspaper with all his attention on paper. Not paying attention on what was going around.

' AsalamOalikum ! Papaa ' She greeted him taking chair out next of his.
' hmm Walikumasalam ! ' He replied and then then folded the newspaper as his wife placed a cup of tea in front of him.
' So beta .. done with the break fast. ??' He inquired of her.
' No I'm about too ' She answered him and the n only her mother said in her rudest tone..
' Oh Princess what can I get you? How to provide you service Mam! ' She hate taunt as much as her mother enjoyed taunting and then only when she was about to say something as a reply of her mothers question she heard AKIf's voice in her ears..
' No answers ! no need of it.. Get up and prepare your breakfast yourself ' And she did what he said..


Quietly she got up from her chair without answering her mother and when she came back her mother was the only one seated on one of the dinning chairs, She seated herself next to her mother, this time with a tray of breakfast.

' ANIA ! I need to ask something from you and hope you will give me direct and right answer ' Her mother started the conversation with serious expression and down in Ania's chest something known as "heart' beated wildly.
' Yeah ! mom go ahead ' She said with trembled hands holding crispy break.
' Who is AKIF? ' Her mother asked directly what she shouldn't. Break fall down from Ania's hand, it laid down the floor but nobody was bothered both of them were busy in looking each other expressions.
' Mom! .... he...he.. ' She was about to answer when only her mother interrupted her;
' Dare you take me on the roller coaster ride this time. Tell me honestly AKIF is or else I will be speaking to your dad about all this ' She threatened Ania.
' Mom! he is a friend ' Ania tried to tell the truth but ...
' How do you communicate with him? I mean how you guys talk? ' Thsi time surely her mom was on rapid fire mood
' Yeah ! ' All she could do was what she just did.. Frightened she was..
' OK! have your breakfast and make him prepare to talk to me. i want to talk to him.. ' She said and she left the dinning table moving towards the lounge while Ania hold her head in her hands.. trembled hands..


Ania was frightened and was worried too as she came into her room and found it empty. After few minutes she heard her mothers footsteps on stair case and felt like she wont be breathing now.. her heart was not in her control now beating wildly she just imagined her life changing in next few hours...

' Ania! common dial his no. ' Her mother said while making her self seated on a brown coloured couch right in front of her...
' Mom.. He lives in my room.. I don't contact him on phone he lives right there.. " Finally Ania speak her heart out..
' HE lives here Wow ANIA ALI so where he lives tell him to meet me' This time she could felt her mother voice making fun of her
' I don't know when I got back he was nowhere but believe me mom he lives here with me..' She said making her mother assure of what nobody can believe with pale face having fear...
' Ania! fine don't tell me I am going to your dad and will ask him to investigate you who AKIF is..' She left the room, and Ania cried as this was the only thing in her hand. Just the she heard a voice
' Common dearie !' And looking up she saw Akif sitting next to her
' AKIF ! why the hell you hided yourself Where have you been...' She was exhausted..
' Ania Calm down please ! just RELAX ! He hold her in her arms where she rested her head on his muscular chest feeling safe and secure , without knowing that she .. they are been watched. Her mother was shocked watching her from the window opened in her room..


She have been always worried for their youngest daughter ANIA, since few days her routine was distracting Sadia's thoughts (ania's mom). After knowing that a boy is there in her daughter she went in balcony to think of what to do next. There she saw her in wierd situation through the only window of Ania's room opened in balcony as it was opened this time. She saw her daughter standing near the book rack and was having arms opened up in the air with head bended a little, as someone is in state of hugging the other one.. )Was she right that she lives with a guy but where he was?) Sadia was horrified and was startle at the very same time as what she saw was unbelievable, she rushed down leaving her child once again alone.. lonely and alone drowned in the sea of her imaginations...



-illusiOn~


P.S( hope you people will like it..)

P.S.S( Its not a pure fiction still do read & comment)

7 blogger feels ..:

vaibhav

ahh... seriously don't knw what to say... i loved the way u have written it... u write pretty well.. the end was something I wasn't expecting.. n may be that makes it spl..

Maverick

This one was so good! And I think I knw abt da part of dis nt bein a completely fictional work! Bt dis was beautiful! A mixture of hope, sadness, pain nd frustration!
luvd it! :)

Arv

beautifully narrated...

we all do have our angels with us...

take care Ins..

Hope you get to feel better...

my prayers are with ya :)

cheers

Anonymous

I really love this one .. wish i cpuld ever write something so lovely !!

Anonymous

i agree with pratsie that it was beautiful, though i say she can also write like this! :)

and its not pure fiction? hmm! interesting!

loved it nonetheless! btw, i too have an update on my conjuring kreativity blog! do read n tell me ur thought! :)

Tan

This is a story!!!! I mean... a nice way to tell a story... not fictional? That creates a doubt in my mind now!!

I'm still enjoying my vacation. Spent sometime in writing this story. want you to read it and tell me how it is. Hope you like it.

Mistake: A Scary reason @ Thus Wrote Tan!

I Zaydi

THANK-YOU everyone..

 
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