Well guys this all happened yesterday when me IllusiOn~ and Vinay aka LEO decided to track me out of sorrows by hope ..
Its a joint venture of our's hope to see your replies..
Its a joint venture of our's hope to see your replies..
SORROW VS HOPE !
I am tired of these emotions,
This crowd on exit gate of my heart,
As only few wants to enter,
And so many are there to leave,
Emotions play with your heart,
They aren't meant forever to stay,
Let go of them, when they want to go,
And new joyous ones will find their way.
Way is what I am searching for,
And even cant find a escape,
Though I want to fight but,
I dont have a reson to stay,
Leave not the hope of escape,
They can't hold you captive forever,
Fight them, because you want to,
No reason could be better ever,
I feel the loneliness with in me,
deeper then ever it was before,
Tell me... Oh my friend!
When to attach with whom to fight?
If you are lonely, come to me,
From its depths I shall pull you through,
Your fight is with yourself, you can't lose,
Your words aren't an illusion, your heart is true,
My heart is not answering,
Its quite like never before,
I feel no shame as I have to accept,
Yes i am a looser and have no shame,
I am tired of these emotions,
This crowd on exit gate of my heart,
As only few wants to enter,
And so many are there to leave,
Emotions play with your heart,
They aren't meant forever to stay,
Let go of them, when they want to go,
And new joyous ones will find their way.
Way is what I am searching for,
And even cant find a escape,
Though I want to fight but,
I dont have a reson to stay,
Leave not the hope of escape,
They can't hold you captive forever,
Fight them, because you want to,
No reason could be better ever,
I feel the loneliness with in me,
deeper then ever it was before,
Tell me... Oh my friend!
When to attach with whom to fight?
If you are lonely, come to me,
From its depths I shall pull you through,
Your fight is with yourself, you can't lose,
Your words aren't an illusion, your heart is true,
My heart is not answering,
Its quite like never before,
I feel no shame as I have to accept,
Yes i am a looser and have no shame,
Knock with persistence, not giving up,
It is your heart, it will answer soon,
How can you tell you are a loser?
In this world of stars, you are the moon.
Moon is alone,
and stars make it more,
I need to refresh,
but how could I,
how can the moon be lonely?
it has many stars to make it smile,
think of joy not the unseen sorrows,
that which kept you going all this while,
Sorrows are what I can see,
As stars are making moon no more happy,
Who says I dont want to be,
Its just I am unable too,
Into my eyes, stare you my friend,
More than any mirror, I can reflect your heart,
I won't let you give up, it's not who I am,
Perhaps, all you need friend is a new start!
New start, is all I need,
But where to start,
and how to start,
is my question and have no answer,
You have written so much now,
So passionate, from your heart so true,
You did not think that you could,
Surely, this could be that start so new,
I today promise will restart,
but give me some time ,
stand closer to me and hold me tight
I may fell down i may go mad
Keep hope, don't see the dark ahead,
Light will beckon you soon my friend,
I am not going anywhere, will be by your side,
Will catch you when you fall friend.
I won't let you go mad with sorrow,
I will give you a bouquet of smiles,
Take the time, but do not give up hope,
Remember the good joyous times
Sure I will and dont you worry,
when friend like you is there with me,
Why I have to go mad why to fall,
So here I smile with a glee
Then use this as the start of a new life,
Let go off all the sorrow, all the strife,
Write this as an Illusion, but that is true,
Am now waiting, to hear that words a new.
Lets together we stand
lets together we move
hold my hand and her we go
With a new glow and new life
Onward Insi, destiny calls,
I will be by your side, always,
A friend to push you forward,
To find you when you have lost your way.
So here I thank you Vinay!
you helped me and you pushed me
Again towards the life,
towards illusion, towards yourself and towards WL
-illusiOn~
11 blogger feels ..:
this is so like Vinu... and this was one beautiful co-write... loved the way sorrow was slowly but steadily directed towards hope and confidence! i am proud of you and Vinu..
p.s. Can I confess something? This poem made me realise something, i never knew before. Yes, sisters could get possessive about their brothers too..
way to go you two! \m/
Wonderful wrk! Insiya nd Leo....u guys r a beautiful combination.....Insiya with her unbridled imagination and vinay wid his awesum capacity to bind words into rhymes!
Luvd dis one!
Thnx Leo fr helpin Insiya out of her pain!
Insiya, U found ur true friend! nw u dont need nyone else! :)
utterly beautiful! the first verse was so amazing with people gathering at the exit gate.
and i loved these two
Way is what I am searching for,
And even cant find a escape,
Though I want to fight but,
I dont have a reson to stay,
I today promise will restart,
but give me some time ,
stand closer to me and hold me tight
I may fell down i may go mad
ended on optimism, liked it :)
listen dearest, grieves come and so does pain, but it is up to you to suffer or learn, I will suggest you to learn. and do read the prose post on WL, i wrote on loneliness :) :)
*love*
never thought of going away.
asbah.
that was very good and a very different style
loved this :)
Pink Orchid
:) thank you so very much..
Maverick!
:) Thank you *bows*
.a.!
:) Thanks for such along reply.. thank you so much..
:) Chirag..
:) honoured..
Arv..
Thank you so very much...
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